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Write a line,
Read it out.
Write another,
Cross it out.
Think of rhymes,
List them all.
(Get writer's block),
Then watch it fall.
Add a word,
A comma here.
Think it through,
Then change m'dear.
Scribbling motions,
Fluid,
Fast.
Correct an error,
Now read what's passed.
"It's a process",
The words you say.
Change the object,
and then forget whatever the heck you were going to write.
The writer's block and the forgetting actually happened as I was writing those parts. It was pretty cool and humorous.
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shadow-boxer-bunny Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awesome! writers block happens a lot to me also.
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taoMega20 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hella funny and cool especialy if you read it fast
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I love this! It reminds me of that commercial for the car company (where they use Tom Brady as a celebrity endorser) (totally forgetting the name of the co) ^^
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shimmer-thestral Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg this is so amazing. This is like my favorite ever!
It's so funny and relatable! For writers anyways xD
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks Kim! I had no idea that so many people would like it.
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shimmer-thestral Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Haha see, writing non morbid poems is awesome!
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
o.O I can't help my morbidity.
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shimmer-thestral Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD I UNDERSTAND ...
not but okay lol
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Pokefangirl491 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Ha, this is really neat! I like how you completely threw away rhythm and rhyme at the last line, it really makes the line stand out!
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I had something rhyming in my head, but then I actually forgot, so... XD
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Pokefangirl491 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Ha, well, a perfect example of the line in the poem, then. :)
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silver-ships-fly Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love it!!! (:
i hate the end when you forget whatever the heck you were going to write.
it's kind of ironic thought, you spend all that time and then nothing.
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, yeah. Thanks, I've had three people favorite it already and I personally didn't like it. I'm glad to know that people enjoyed it, though.
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